Add a strong guarantee. Offering a money back guarantee is a proven marketing technique that is an excellent way to increase bids and sales. It may be tempting to place a time limit on your guarantee, but these guarantees don't carry much weight. It is far better to not include a time limit because it will send a strong message that encourages more bids and sales. If someone has had an item for more than 30 days they are not likely to suddenly turn around and send it back. If someone does send it back, it's usually because they have a genuine problem with the item and it's only right they get a refund. You may get a few returns, but they will be outweighed by the extra sales you will generate with your guarantee.
Create a sense of urgency to encourage immediate bids. Auctions are urgent by their very nature but it's a good idea to create a sense of urgency in your auction. One way to do this is to repeat the benefits of your item. If your item is no longer being made or is hard to find, emphasize its rarity and the fact this might be the last chance to buy it.
Now that you've written your description and offered a guarantee, you now need to ask for the sale. You've convinced the buyer they want the item and you need to ask for the sale. It doesn't need to be long, just compelling. You can restate the benefits of the item and ask for the bid.
This is by no means a complete course on writing sales copy, but it will give you a good place to begin writing auctions that will improve sales.
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