"A good style should show no signs of effort. What is written should seem a happy accident." W. Somerset Maugham
The key point of this quote is the word ’seem’ which means that those ‘happy accidents’ are thoroughly prepared. Inaccurate spelling here, a missed punctuation mark there – and things can turn into a ’serious’ or even ‘fatal’ accident for your copy. I’m not going to say that WHAT you write is less important than HOW you do it, but repeated stylistic mistakes can divert all of your prospects, unless they are completely illiterate themselves or blind (the latest survey showed they weren’t).
Tame your style before it starts ‘biting’ your income. Enhance your copy in 10 easy steps:
1. Ampersand (&)
Though ‘and’ and ‘&’ stand for the same thing, you shouldn’t abuse the latter. Follow the rule: the ampersand sign is used for trade names and radio station frequencies.
* Dolce & Gabanna * JSM Radio 93.2 & 108.1 FM, 1005 & 1284 AM * Franny and Zooey by JD Salinger
2. Contact Details
Be precise. Such introductions as "Bond. James Bond" went out of fashion about thirty years ago. Scrupulous web users want to know where exactly they can find your amazing products, services or whatever you offer them. So, disclose all these step by step:
* Name; * Postal address (addressee’s name, company, building name, number and street name, town, country and postcode). Separate it by starting a new line or by putting a comma; * Telephone number (dialing codes are given in one block, without brackets); * Fax number; * Email; * Website (give the shortest URL possible and make sure it works by loading it in a web browser. Omit ‘www’ in unclickable URLs but use it in links)
3. Foreign Words and Characters
If a word or phrase aren’t generally accepted in the language, you should use italics. ‘Generally accepted’ means they have become a part of English. Consult with the dictionary, if necessary. Make sure foreign symbols are identified correctly: readers are unlikely to guess that ‘aa,ii eona oi?ioi’ stands for:
* clientele (this French word is now a part of the English language) * si vales bene est ego valeo (a Latin phrase)
4. Italics
Apart from foreign words, italics are used for titles of TV and radio programs, books, albums or songs, plays, paintings, newspapers, magazines etc (yes, that is etc, not etc). Italicize ‘the’ when it is on the masthead:
* The Economist * Monet’s Poppies Blooming * Eminem’s Encore
5. Lists
The most critical thing with lists is to keep parallelism. Don’t jump from one grammatic structure to another, for example, don’t write like this
To make finger-licking cookies we need:
* 2 tbs cinnamon * 0.5 kg sugar * 1 cup flour * to add 4 eggs * to heat the oven * kneading dough
Even if your grandma had known of this delicious meal from Queen of England, that’s a fat chance your prospects appreciate the recipe: it looks absolutely illiterate.
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